More Crazy Poetry

I wrote most of my poem collection about 5 - 10 years ago and I'm not sure I could write them now. See what you think about these 2.

Death in their Leers malcontents breathe heavy at my door
hot acrid air seeping beneath curling snarling seeking
exposed naked vulnerability
attack mode revenge riot
ever misunderstanding my motives comdemnation
welcoming my deserved punishment the dedicated wounded souls hacked
through clawing kicking death in their leers
righteousness in their hearts swirling savagely around me ripping at my pale wicked flesh flogging squeezing a worthless life
made breathless lifeless sacred retribution

Never Lie (a song) - no music written for it yet
Girl, it's not that I want to be free
it's just that I can clearly see
that I'm not good enough for you even though you think our love is true
These aren't the words I want to hear
Why don't you sit me down, buy me a beer risk the sliding of a tear and say
Baby, you and I are through
Just don't want you -
what can I do?
Instead you tell me I'm the best
So much nobler than the rest
Deserve a different better guy
Man, I hate it when you lie
These aren't the words I want to hear
Please sit me down, buy me a beer risk the sliding of a tear and say
Baby, you and I are through
Just don't want you -
nothin' can I do.
The moral of this story is if you wanna leave don't introduce her to Steve
but kiss her cheek and say goodbye
thanks for the good times let her plead -
let her cry but whatever you do - never lie!
Sit her down - buy her a beer
Risk the sadness - the heartbreaking tear but whatever you do - never lie!